Quite Literal
This is abysmal.
I can’t believe that I ever thought this would get
published, let alone be my magnum opus.
The adverbs, there’s so many of them. They burn my eyes.
It’s all so tell-y too. I show hardly anything and it
doesn’t do the lacking plot and three identical main characters any favours.
Seriously, they’re the same.
The romance is awful too, it’s pointless and makes me look
like a raving misogynist.
And I haven’t even started on the blood.
Why on earth did I think writing the first draft in
human blood would be a good idea?
Ew.
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